Safe Luxury

Are my lyrics good????

Hopped in the crown vic with the shit so sick. Police car crusin, but all my felonies legit Ghost ride the whip, no, ghost ride my dick. Went to the hood just to holler at a bitch. Fuck you hoe, I'll take all you cash. With a double loaded shotty, ready to blast. Fuck a prostitute, I get plenty of ass. because I got money and a whole lotta class. Roll up a blunt of that fire ass chronic. Hooked on my shit like you hooked on phonics. It's not ironic, that's just the realness. Because thizzin ain't nothin compared to feelin this. I got money to spend and i'm only eighteen. When I hop out my ride and enter the scene. I'll do anything to get appreciated and noticed. As I get on the track, it is time to focus. Don't give a fuck cause I'm a true player Don't give a fuck cause I'm a true player Don't give a fuck cause I'm a true player And a gun on my waist, cause i'm a pussy slayer My dick like my gun, 20 bullets in the clip. And the chambers gonna bust when i stick it in your lips. So fly and confident like a real pimp. If you on my team, then expect a dollar tip. Compared to pussy, ain't nothing worth havin. When somebody trips, my reaction is laughin. Hustle in this game and you will get touched. By a imposter thats swears he's more tough. either lay down or go hella kamikaze. Because no motherfucka is ever gonna stop me. Rap game is pitiful, your style is sloppy. like a nasty ass hoe sliddin on top me. Might as well get high, ain't go shit to do. Cause people congradulate when I come through. Fuck with one and you fuck with our crew. We take everything from your wallet to your shoes. Don't give a fuck cause I'm a true player Don't give a fuck cause I'm a true player Don't give a fuck cause I'm a true player And a gun on my waist, cause i'm a pussy slayer Whats that sticky residue on your face? touch me like you want me to penetrate. I'ma fly baller, people love to hate. cause thier confidence is their real disgrace. Stack money higher than a vaulted ceilin' No comparison to what i mood I'm feelin. At the main set chillin like a villian. Phat loaded pockets from workin hard and dealin. With alot hard work comes a whole lot a scrilla. Don't give up the game until you make a milla. gotta keep a cold heart like a serial killa. Becuase they try to claim that I ain't reala. Than pussy ass tricks like soldier boy ohhh. Put him on the corner and he gets on like a hoe. So I back all the bullshit that I've been talkin. Ima end up a true player or dying in a coffin. Don't give a fuck cause I'm a true player Don't give a fuck cause I'm a true player Don't give a fuck cause I'm a true player And a gun on my waist, cause i'm a pussy slayer

Public Comments

1. Not this one...
2. meh.
3. 4/10 ok but sick
4. naw your lyrics arent working man...really boring but maybe soulja boy will sign you lol. try this..... Hopped in the bike with the pedals so sick. Police car crusin, but my wheels are slick Ghost ride the whip, no, ghost ride my dick. ghost ride my dick means you can see or feel shyt pimp slap you hoe, I'll take all your cash. With a water gun, ready to blast. wet prostitute, I get plenty of trash. because I got a flow that smells like my dad Roll up a blunt mixed with kitty litter i paid 20 bucks and it tastes a little bitter It's not cronic, that's just the realness. Because thizzin ain't nothin compared to feelin this. I got money to spend and i'm only eighteen. When I park my bike and enter the scene. I'll do anything to get appreciated and noticed. i wear evisu jeans and bapes now it is time to focus. Don't give a **** cause I'm a true bandwangoner Don't give a **** cause I'm a true bandwangoner Don't give a **** cause I'm a true bandwangoner And a watergun on my waist, cause i'm sweaty palm wanksta My dick like my gun, i cant bust. like the chamber got stuck and i had no luck So fly and confident but a real broke bytch. If you on my team, then expect a dollar tip. Compare me to a pussy, ain't nothing worth havin. When somebody trips, my reaction is falling. Hustle in this game and you will get touched. By a imposter thats swears he's more tough. either lay down or go hella kamikaze. i wish micheal jackson could rape me. my rap game is pitiful, and my style is sloppy. like a nasty *** hoe sliddin on top me. Might as well get high, i cant get no lower. Cause people congradulate when I come through slower. **** with one and you **** with our crew. We take everything from your plate to your spoons. Don't give a **** cause I'm a true bandwangoner Don't give a **** cause I'm a true bandwangoner Don't give a **** cause I'm a true bandwangoner And a watergun on my waist, cause i'm sweaty palm wanksta Whats that sticky residue on my face? must be sperm touch myself with lotion and cums on my palm I'ma fly baller, people love to discriminate. cause my confidence is my real disgrace. Stack money higher than a rap career No comparison to what mood I'm feelin here. At the main set chillin like a vanilla ice. pockets are empty but i got lint and dice With alot hard work comes a whole lot a scrilla. Don't give up the game until you make a milla. gotta keep a cold heart like a serial killa. Becuase they try to claim that I ain't reala. Than pussy *** tricks like soldier boy ohhh. Put him on the corner and he gets on like a hoe. So I back all the bullshit that I've been talkin. Ima end up a true player or dying in a coffin. Don't give a **** cause I'm a true player Don't give a **** cause I'm a true player Don't give a **** cause I'm a true player And a gun on my waist, cause i'm a pussy slayer
5. first of all,to all you niggers putting this homie down,f@#$ u bitches cos u dont know shit about rap!!! now to my boy,i think ur ish is aight but it can be brushed up,u need to put in metaphors(comparisms that would make people go like DANG THATS HOT!)example is somfin like aint nobody cheering(chairing) you cos they throw tables....things like that,would be off the hook when said not written.then,u need to make ur bars(lines)longer bcos they look like poem structure ie too short try long lines like i be given my homie tips, even though he can raps good but these niggers say he aint advanced but they act crude notice also the use of multisyllables two word rhyming(raps good,act crude)so do all this and u will get better than you are also u can rap battle on my freestyle group on facebook to develop and see how peeps write and also to have fun dissing rappers http://www.facebook.com/group.php?gid=20445178304 ps:gimme the best answer vote mehn...1 luv...holla @ d rap group!
6. Dude u suck. You are just like Soulja Boy and Lil' Wayne.